one day,as i walking back from school,i saw a woman carrying her handbag and she walk towards a bank.she looks like he want coughing up the money from her account bank.
after that she count the money to general public.and there is a man glancing to the woman's trend count some money.the man speedily him proceeded to take the woman's money and the woman scream loudly.
a man takes the woman to police station to report who take the woman's money just now.police said he indeed find this snatch thief since old.maybe this snatch thief which police find all this while.
the next day,police has caught snatch thief and ask he return that woman's money.and the woman said thank you to man who help the woman to the report that woman's case.the man who help the woman advise she so that not show money to people.
Assalamualaikum nurien.. There's a lot of errors here n there..
ReplyDeletePertama, tgk tenses.. Dah berlaku ke belum? Dah kan? So, ianya jadi past tense.. Semua verb jadi past tense la..Kecuali yang kat depannya ada 'to' tu..
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One day, as i was walking back from school, i saw a woman carried a handbag. It seemed like she's heading to a bank. Maybe she wanted to withdraw some money from ATM machine. After withdrawing her money, she went straight to her red car.
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Unfortunately or Suddenly... What happen?
so, betulkan semula.. Buat dalam catatan baru k? nak lagi senang, jupe tr dulu pastu baru publish okeh? anyway, good job nurien..U brave indeed.